Comments on: The Creator

By: rampantheart

rampantheart — Tue, 26 May 2009 14:15:04 +0000

@mixdev,
Thanks a lot for stopping by to comment! Kanchipuram is a freaking awesome place! Happy travelling!

By: mixdev

mixdev — Fri, 22 May 2009 13:55:35 +0000

If god is like what people say, he wouldn’t have let you know about him. So, well, there is something fishy about it. BTW, Kanchipuran is in my list, just next to Thanchavoor.

By: rads

rads — Fri, 22 May 2009 09:50:25 +0000

Lovely place, followed from twitter and iWriter here via narain. Long live hops eh?

wanted to let you also now that the email at iWriter is bouncing. You may want to look into it?

Rads

By: rampantheart

rampantheart — Sat, 02 May 2009 13:37:08 +0000

@cheth,

Thanks for the kind words, Cheth!

By: cheth

cheth — Sat, 02 May 2009 02:49:02 +0000

@Sudhamshu, I agree on that.. I too got lost while reading! anyway @rampantheart nice writeup.. now i really need to subscribe to your blog mail updates so that i dont miss out

By: rampantheart

rampantheart — Mon, 27 Apr 2009 03:29:57 +0000

@Kartz,

You should visit Kanchipuram some day! What a place!

By: rampantheart

rampantheart — Mon, 27 Apr 2009 03:27:17 +0000

@Sudhamshu,

Ha ha! I am glad you were honest with your words! I will try using simple language in the future.

By: Kartz

Kartz — Sat, 25 Apr 2009 14:47:08 +0000

Hmmm… Niiiice..!!!

And in reply to your after thought – it isn’t for nothing that we also say, God is Man’s manifestation.

Peace. Have a lovely weekend.

—
Kanchipuram. Interesting; my folks were there a couple of days back. No, I wasn’t part of the tour.

By: Sudhamshu

Sudhamshu — Sat, 25 Apr 2009 06:57:17 +0000

The introspection into the life of a poor family is certainly heart-rendering. You certainly placed yourself quite well into the woman’s mind and brought out her feelings so well.
Kids should be kids & not so mature!
As for the story as a whole: I think you overdid the adjectives! A simple story needs to be told as simply as possible! Just my thought.