Comments on: Midnight Whispers-A Poem http://thevoiceswith.in/2009/05/midnight-whispers/ Hungry Minds. Fed. Wed, 03 Mar 2010 11:44:59 +0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: rampantheart http://thevoiceswith.in/2009/05/midnight-whispers/comment-page-1/#comment-829 rampantheart Tue, 02 Jun 2009 03:12:28 +0000 http://thevoiceswith.in/?p=334#comment-829 @Sudhamshu, I am glad you liked the poem! Thanks for stopping by to comment! @knowsnotmuch and @thunderror, Thanks for your feedback. I shall think of something else that will suit the poem better. Thanks for stopping by to have your say. @Spitphyre, I am glad you liked it! Thanks for the encouraging words! @Sudhamshu,
I am glad you liked the poem! Thanks for stopping by to comment!

@knowsnotmuch and @thunderror,
Thanks for your feedback. I shall think of something else that will suit the poem better. Thanks for stopping by to have your say.

@Spitphyre,
I am glad you liked it! Thanks for the encouraging words!

]]> By: thunderror http://thevoiceswith.in/2009/05/midnight-whispers/comment-page-1/#comment-825 thunderror Fri, 29 May 2009 09:37:44 +0000 http://thevoiceswith.in/?p=334#comment-825 I agree with knowsnotmuch "the gravitational pull of earth look like a joke" looks so out of place in such an archaic poem I agree with knowsnotmuch “the gravitational pull of earth look like a joke” looks so out of place in such an archaic poem

]]> By: Spitphyre http://thevoiceswith.in/2009/05/midnight-whispers/comment-page-1/#comment-824 Spitphyre Wed, 27 May 2009 17:40:04 +0000 http://thevoiceswith.in/?p=334#comment-824 Lovers... Always the promise of something good, just to be snatched so cruelly later. I loved the imagery girl. Lovers… Always the promise of something good, just to be snatched so cruelly later. I loved the imagery girl.

]]> By: knowsnotmuch http://thevoiceswith.in/2009/05/midnight-whispers/comment-page-1/#comment-823 knowsnotmuch Wed, 27 May 2009 10:23:01 +0000 http://thevoiceswith.in/?p=334#comment-823 This is nice - "gravitational pull of earth" sticks out like a sore thumb though :)) You could swap that with weight of the earth which could also be inferred as burdens. This is nice – “gravitational pull of earth” sticks out like a sore thumb though :) ) You could swap that with weight of the earth which could also be inferred as burdens.

]]> By: Sudhamshu http://thevoiceswith.in/2009/05/midnight-whispers/comment-page-1/#comment-822 Sudhamshu Wed, 27 May 2009 07:36:11 +0000 http://thevoiceswith.in/?p=334#comment-822 Interesting poem. The sudden plunge from "I love you" to "I desert thee" is distressing. I guess that is why men are afraid of women :P "You bereaved me of my self" - I like this line :) Interesting poem. The sudden plunge from “I love you” to “I desert thee” is distressing. I guess that is why men are afraid of women :P

“You bereaved me of my self” – I like this line :)

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